tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post7219210720897531409..comments2023-04-30T06:07:24.976-05:00Comments on words: 3ww prompt: delayed, focus, edgeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-67687734190869355362008-05-26T16:44:00.000-05:002008-05-26T16:44:00.000-05:00GReat! I love the concrete image of the poem comin...GReat! I love the concrete image of the poem coming into focus, just as the narrator intends to focus on her life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-31378766203698601232008-05-26T10:54:00.000-05:002008-05-26T10:54:00.000-05:00Well done.... It reminded me of an hour glass turn...Well done.... It reminded me of an hour glass turned on...Medhinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17833745510877201001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-25837940124437716772008-05-23T13:33:00.000-05:002008-05-23T13:33:00.000-05:00...loved the format how it supports the power of y......loved the format how it supports the power of yr poem... time is meaningless how it stretches out before us.. it is all about in the moment.. looking past or future is of little consequence.. tho this is all easier spoken than living..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-83491952099203264722008-05-22T08:16:00.000-05:002008-05-22T08:16:00.000-05:00Wow. That's fabulous.Wow. That's fabulous.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-24745057074157064292008-05-22T08:11:00.000-05:002008-05-22T08:11:00.000-05:00i love how it works so well with visual appearance...i love how it works so well with visual appearance. i hope i make the most of my life. regert having lost a few years in between.Sanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13459272427622582627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-31213987985570332282008-05-22T06:23:00.000-05:002008-05-22T06:23:00.000-05:00for years i have failed miserably at participating...for years i have failed miserably at participating in my own life... i hear that same sentiment here......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606125066557481311.post-21978449372137803812008-05-21T22:12:00.000-05:002008-05-21T22:12:00.000-05:00Truly visual..Truly visual..gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.com