Wednesday, January 30, 2008

3ww writing prompt

the approach
was smooth
like any other night
at the bar,
the sweat dripped
from her bottle
the music blasted
in the background
she glanced timidly
over her shoulder,
it was inevitable
their eyes would lock
the impact would
affect her for eternity

forever they would be
connected, one soul
one heart, divided


tumblewords said...

I can see this, for sure. Nicely done!

LittleWing said...

enjoyed your story... pictured it well..

Christy said...

well done! too often we let moments that may have the impact to change our lives pass us by.

rwellsrwells said...

as they do, but, an eternity?

TC said...

The ending caught me by surprise. The rest of it seemed to be an expected story, but the last bit wasn't what I anticipated.