Friday, February 1, 2008

magic

she walks
through
the shadows
of her dreams
searching for
a truth,
a meaning
that only
one can give.
will she ever
know the meaning
of it all. the pain,
the undeniable pleasure
in each moment.
how will she find
a way out.
like alice falling
through the
rabbit hole
she searches
for an end,
the light,
something
to bring meaning
to it all. forever
she will wander alone,
helpless making
herself known.
if to noone but herself
she will discover.

11 comments:

anthonynorth said...

We need meaning in our life. With it, all can be magical.

Keith's Ramblings said...

Pure magic. A lovely piece.

Noah the Great said...

It was good, at least you'll know yourself, if no one else does.

Head Cookie said...

What a magical piece. She will indeed find herself and her place in this big magical world.

Tumblewords: said...

Nicely written, questioning piece. Enjoyed the read.

Constance Brewer said...

Nicely done. A wonderful "Alice in the rabbit hole" moment

little wing writer said...

a lovely piece of a poetic journey...

paisley said...

and sometimes i do believe self discovery is the most important journey of all.....

UL said...

she will find her very soul this way, i liked this much.

rebecca said...

very nicely written...a lovely piece indeed.

Karina said...

This had a great flow to it. Very nice!