this one was kind of hard, i'm really trying to stretch myself.
the world around me
has begun to unravel
into heaps of snow
covered emotions
from a heart only
covered by the thread
of a t-shirt--bare
the seams worn
from the years.
there's blooming
in the distance,
as the warm sun
rises, it will wake
me with a punch
to be alive...again.
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some portions of life are in fact that blase... nothing like a good jump start......
beautiful imagery.
Some lovely images here.
--Gay
You stretch well! Nice post!
heaps of snow
covered emotions
this was very visual for me. nicely done.
spring makes life feel worth living again
Great imagery in here..
digging into fruit punch
I like the hope at the end. It's always good to have something to look forward to.
WOW. The first half was really lovely and the second had real life to it. Hope. A new start.
Love it.
The way this poem reads reminds me of winter - at the end wonderfully punctuated by spring! I am stretching for that time of year myself.
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