Wednesday, April 9, 2008
3ww writing prompt; funny, remember, theatre
memories
it's funny the times
i remember you most;
when the stars are out
in full and sounds of
nature surround me.
i think of you when
i shop for groceries
or while i'm working
on a new poem.
sometimes i think
of you when i go
to the theatre and
the movie is one i
know you'd like.
it's really unintentional
these times you slip
into my life. i'd like to
think i could make it
through one day and
never have you cross
my mind, but the chances
of that seem slim.
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9 comments:
no.. true love is branded on ones heart.. there is no escape,, only sweet repose....
some loves are impossible to break from. Great use of the word--saw the theme obviously but had to really look for the words
i really like this...nice imagery. and, so true the words!
This is so genuine and to the heart. I really enjoyed it.
poignant and lovely
this was absolutely beautiful :)
Oh beautiful. Heartbreaking, but beautiful.
an ode to a lost love maybe? nicely written
Maybe this is someone you would like to wipe out of your memory? I guess there are several interpretations of the poem, depending on the reader's experience. That's what makes it so good.
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