Wednesday, April 16, 2008

3ww writing prompt touching, visible, stage

thank you

it is so touching
that you care.
your concern
for my heart
is inspiring. that
you care enough
to stage one of
those interventions
on my behalf is
most endearing.
even though it is
visible to everyone
how well i am doing,
it's good that you
care.

12 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

Love this little thank you note! It reminds me of William Carlos Williams's note about the plums.

Leonard Blumfeld said...

I like the dry irony in this one.

niebla said...

Very nice and light what you did with the 3 words.

distracted by shiny objects said...

Love it. Reminds me of a young Bette Davis. Could get the sharp point in before you even felt it touch your skin. well done! AnnieH

tumblewords said...

Sharp, clever and ironic...nice!

Tammy said...

Creative piece of irony. Well done!

paisley said...

i dont know that i agree with the theory of the intervention,, but if it has in this instance been equated with love.. i guess it is a good thing....

TC said...

I feel some biting sarcasm in this one...

WriterKat said...

I love the layers of this. The tone behind the words. Great!

gautami tripathy said...

I like the connotations of it!

green-eyed monster

Lucy said...

I can just hear your tone of voice and it's very clever! :)

Amarettogirl said...

Was it really grateful??? The quick, swift pace made it it feel eerily two sided! great job!