Thursday, April 17, 2008

broken

this brokenness inside
of me has become to

heavy to hold. the
darkness in my heart
is aching for the light,
of faith to come to my
rescue, freeing my spirit.
can i let go of this pain?
when we've become such
good friends. a void that
you can always count on
in the loneliness of the
night. shallow breaths
of hope creep in ever
so gently, to help me
get through. can it make
a difference to give in
to this hope?

6 comments:

tumblewords said...

Oh, yes, to give in to hope is, I think, a good thing!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Hope, help and happiness.
Where there's hope, there's help, where there's help, there's happiness! perhaps..

Linda said...

Lots of emotion here!

paisley said...

pain is an undaunting bedfellow.. whereas you are powerless to abandon it... one day you will wake to find,, it has in fact abandoned you......

Aareet Krsna said...

I like the way you break sentences in your verse. Hope is but all we have to fight pain - it's enough.

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