Wednesday, March 12, 2008

3ww writing prompt apartment began, numb


her new life began.
today she moved in.
her apartment was
small, to say the least,
but it was hers alone.
in the city, the lights
danced in the night sky.
she could see the world
from her window. she
felt hopeful, maybe
the numbness would
finally go away.
she would finally
begin to feel again.


pia said...

I so understand wanting to feel hopeful--and I remember too well the feeling of wanting to be alone--in an apartment of any size

pjd said...

Transition appears to be the theme of the day for most 3WW writers I've visited. The words really point that direction though, don't they?

tumblewords said...

Indeed. She will. Nice work!

paisley said...

she will sometimes it takes time.. but it happens... this was very nicely said.....

Laane said...

This is absolutely great!

You can find my entry here: The Fire

Have a great day!

UL said...

Yes hope and change definitely turns the tide..., she made the right move. :)

anthonynorth said...

When you're down, and you grasp hope, you know there's only one way to go.

TC said...

It hasn't been all that long since I've felt that way.

gautami tripathy said...

I can't even begin to tell you how much I relate to this!

Can it get any worse than this?

Sherry ~ Cherie ~ ms. herbes de provence said...

Hope, fresh beginning...I want to be in that apartment!

OneMoreBeliever said...

ohhh, that was beautiful...